开发信我该拿你怎么办

展会回来,老板给了我一些带回来的客人资料,让我试着给客人发邮件,但是有些发了不是没有覆信就是被退回来,不知道是为什么,由于经常在里面闲逛学习,所以说总会看到有些关于这种开发信的题目,前辈们的建议也是各有各的说法,大多的人说是由于有附件或者没有使用企业邮箱的缘故,这对我来说都有点困难。1.附件里面主要具体的包括了公司的先容以及产品信息(图片之类),觉得不可省略,要不然客人可能会对我们的了解比较抽象 2.由于我们公司不大,还没有自己的企业邮箱,我大多是用hotmail跟yahoo的。不知道是不是这两个原因了,总之效果不是很好,当然可能也是由于我是新人,不懂得如何往写好这个开发信吧,呵呵请教各位前辈,你们觉得第一次发邮件给客人,有没有必要附些图片等等的呢?,你们都是怎么做的哦
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Dear Sir or Madam: We obtained your name and address from the international internet in March 2004 and we know that you are interested in Telecontrol Racing Car produced in China. Now , we are writing to you to hope establish business relations with you . Our company was founded in 1952, specialized in toy and handicraft,
And have already became one of the biggest import & export company in China now. Telecontrol Racing Car is our new product, and it is very popular all over the world. Our product hold high reputation by the clients in the world wide with the high quality and favorable price. In order to give you a gengral idea of various kinds of product that we are handling, we are airmailing you under separate cover our latest catalogue for your reference. Please let us know immediately if you are interested in our products. We look forward to your early reply.

yours faithfully,
Dear Sir, We learn your company from the internet that you are one of the leading manufacturer in this field.
We take this opportunity to write you and hope to enter into business relations with you.
We are a leading XXX manufacturer with many years R&D experience in China. In order to give you a rough idea of our products, we are attaching you our latest catalogue for your reference. If you find any of the items interesting, please let us know as soon as possible. We await your specific enquiries. BEST REGARDS
Dear Sir / Madam, It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relation ship with you. Your company name and email address have been introduced by e-Marketplace. KCT Co., Ltd. is one of the best professional company to develop and manufacture functional and new materials. KCT Co., Led. is manufacturing hardwood charcoal polymer that can be applied to our daily goods with its antimicrobial effect, deodorization and infrared ray (Examples: Hardwood charcoal polymer receptacle, chopping board, food waste collecting container and bedclothes).
In addition, we have developed and are currently manufacturing the antistatic laminated sheet which can be used semi-permanently; replacing a disposable *s sheet used for loading goods on the pallet. In order to diversify our existing market, we are interested in supplying our high quality products to you on favorable terms and conditions. Upon receipt of your inquiries. For more information, we would like to let you know our company web site as below.
http://kct2004.en.ecplaza.net If you are interested in our products, please contact us at any time. Hope to hear good news from you. We thank you very much for your attention and look forward to your reply soon. Sincerely Yours,
看不懂,我的要命的英文
非常感谢大家的帮助,内容我倒是会写,只是我有个疑问,就是附件附上后是否会影响客人收到我的邮件呢?
由于有些人说有图片的话会被直接当作垃圾邮件给过滤掉了呢
可能邮箱有占一部分原因吧 !由于象这种免费的邮箱好多都被当垃圾邮件处理了!
最好别放图片之类的,很轻易当成垃圾邮件
呵呵,3KS了,看来还是跟邮箱大有关系吧,可能用企业邮箱就好了吧,不知作别人都是用什么免费邮箱在发的呢,大家来推荐下吧
不会吧,图片被当成垃圾邮件啊,第一次听说的,呵呵
学习了,3KS!
各位,信写好了,要往哪发呀?这是我现在最大的疑问.
不知该如何在网上找到讯盘,有好多看到内容,却看不到联系方式,急!
请问,怎么才能得到联系方式和客户联系呢?
感谢大家的帮忙

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